2 thoughts on “Kho Na Jayein Yeh Taare Zamein Par…

  • March 1, 2008 at 8:39 AM
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    Nice poem , good attempt to replicate the messege Amir tried to convery through TZP.

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  • March 7, 2008 at 5:22 AM
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    Wonderful poem, you are good at narration. I liked it and you have handled the them quite intelligently.

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